Above is a word cloud, showing the feedback i received, i have learnt alot through receiving feedback, it helped me develop my products and see improvements through the audiences eyes. Firstly I received feedback when giving my pitch, my peers gave me feedback on my idea, and having received it I changed the genre characteristic from narrative to performance based, this was a major change and has been rewarding with my final product clearly matching my genre as shown in this word cloud. The feedback i received was from peers before, but this feedback cloud consists of information from my target audience. I gained both positive and negative comments.
Negative comments:
- lip syncing out of time
- video quality bad
- no reference to intertextuality
- could have more variation of shots
- incorporate more genre characteristic
- better props and locations
If i did this project again, i would insure i spent more time working on producing the products, and spend more time researching my genre to fully incorporate all the characteristic that resemble Rap. I would also spend more time editing the video to get the lip syncing perfect and in time. the camera i used was a still camera with an added feature to video, this is why the video quality was bad as a result my music video suffered, therefore i would change the camera i use in future projects as i am a rap artist after all.
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