Footage for my music video

This is some of the initial footage taken for the planned story board, I am happy with alot of the footage, i have taken into consideration of mise-en-scene, through filming the surrounding by panning the camera after the artist has finished his vocals.I have also included a genre characteristic by incoporating a veichle in the mise-en-scene showing wealth. Also i considered different angles to create different effect such as make the artist look powerful from low angle shots.

However I feel the footage lacks direction and the planned story board will be edited, and more scenes will be added. I feel there needs to be a greater emphasise on the surrounding of the artist to give the audience and understanding of the artists background.

I feel some of the footage lacked good lighting and this could be an issue with the proffesionalism of the final product, therfore there are two methods i will use to resolve this, firstly i could film the shots again, which is time consuming or alternatively use the video effect on the editing to increase the brightness of the footage or add an effect and impliment Goodwins principles.

Also I feel i have not incoporated enough footage which will be efficent to use for lipsyncing so i will be focusing on adding extra footage, a scene of a close up of my lips, and me say the lyrics slowly and then speeding up the footage using the editing software to match the vocal on the music. This should if done properly show clear lipsyncing showing lyrics linked to visuals.